tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post5652113822476290099..comments2023-07-01T08:14:05.269-04:00Comments on Havan's Heavenly Haven: Flash Fiction Friday #3Havanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06116528705614786647noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-28847850273627581502011-11-07T13:55:24.188-05:002011-11-07T13:55:24.188-05:00Oooohhh....you have the beginnings of a great stor...Oooohhh....you have the beginnings of a great story! FABULOUS JOB!!Katie Harperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682937245854100385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-9618650381963428722011-11-06T19:28:13.095-05:002011-11-06T19:28:13.095-05:00Oohh. It had the ring of an old time romance novel...Oohh. It had the ring of an old time romance novel... the mouthy reluctant bride, the aggressive groom. I wanted him to rip off the slip and throw her down on the bed and have his way with her. Can't wait to read more. Great post Havan :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-46773635055372593612011-11-05T23:16:12.866-04:002011-11-05T23:16:12.866-04:00Yay for Fae-kind! Sprites...love it. Arranged mar...Yay for Fae-kind! Sprites...love it. Arranged marriages suck, but maybe he'll surprise her and show her he's really the only one for her. Then again, maybe she'll defy Daddy and skip out on her kind completely and seek out a tasty mors-mortal! ;)<br /><br />~LunaLunaEllaAldorahttp://moonkissedromantica.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-85418623062323455952011-11-05T09:07:07.504-04:002011-11-05T09:07:07.504-04:00Great FFF. I wish there was more. Why does she thi...Great FFF. I wish there was more. Why does she think marriage is a sacrifice? Why does he want to marry her? What happens after he says No? UHG. Flash Fiction Friday needs to be longer.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04942135353282027689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-58002229049413702802011-11-04T23:24:35.846-04:002011-11-04T23:24:35.846-04:00I enjoyed this FFF, was a completely different dir...I enjoyed this FFF, was a completely different direction than I expected. I can say an arranged marriage might be just as painful as physical sacrifice. :) nice FFFDavee Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09939904353100495515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-26621016451349701432011-11-04T22:16:43.116-04:002011-11-04T22:16:43.116-04:00What a lovely FFF! Fantastic job.What a lovely FFF! Fantastic job.Author Cyril J. Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08121700729761013966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-22816938325244111492011-11-04T21:21:02.408-04:002011-11-04T21:21:02.408-04:00Oh I loved it. I want to know the whole story.Oh I loved it. I want to know the whole story.VenusBookluvrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03834883038862865680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-82227241931128942782011-11-04T17:34:25.106-04:002011-11-04T17:34:25.106-04:00Aw, she's sweet! loved it!Aw, she's sweet! loved it!Gemma Parkeshttp://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-33656100238482896192011-11-04T16:44:54.092-04:002011-11-04T16:44:54.092-04:00Havan, you have a deliciously twisted imagination ...Havan, you have a deliciously twisted imagination and I love it. Perhaps he will "surprise" her when they consummate the marriage.Benjamin T. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12804675835177034017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-30385142952934536622011-11-04T09:19:45.691-04:002011-11-04T09:19:45.691-04:00I love it. Very good. Should be a rather interesti...I love it. Very good. Should be a rather interesting marriage.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11693545261437024671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-52492319017990991572011-11-04T09:02:05.862-04:002011-11-04T09:02:05.862-04:00Love it! Very well thought out and such an image f...Love it! Very well thought out and such an image for 100 words. WOW.Lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12389751013608104012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-75850880435891252492011-11-04T08:53:33.013-04:002011-11-04T08:53:33.013-04:00oh oh!! you did it again!! great post my yang!! Ma...oh oh!! you did it again!! great post my yang!! Marriage as a sacrifice... Good thinking in a way lolJadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03832141396585867654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-27215558525476277592011-11-04T08:45:04.958-04:002011-11-04T08:45:04.958-04:00that was fantastic Havan! nothing like arranged ma...that was fantastic Havan! nothing like arranged marriages :P<br /><br />Erika <a href="http://erpierce.com/testing-to-see/" rel="nofollow">Erika Badass FFF</a>Erika Badasshttp://www.erpierce.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-47809981105027809112011-11-04T08:35:15.160-04:002011-11-04T08:35:15.160-04:00sounds like a promising start to marital bliss... ...sounds like a promising start to marital bliss... or maybe not... :)Lee Brazilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04644875632080817419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-32252334162762408752011-11-04T07:53:58.826-04:002011-11-04T07:53:58.826-04:00LOL. I loved it. That marriage should be quite ent...LOL. I loved it. That marriage should be quite entertaining. :)Sherri Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00303173531928181614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8309470853049653222.post-17537175674416454392011-11-04T06:25:44.667-04:002011-11-04T06:25:44.667-04:00LOved it Haven. You needed to keep the trench coat...LOved it Haven. You needed to keep the trench coat open though so I could get bthe rest of the story.Bonni Sansomnoreply@blogger.com