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Friday, January 27, 2012

Flash Friday Fiction #13...


Happy Friday Everyone!!!

Are you ready for the flashing to begin????

So this Friday Flash Fiction is a number of talented authors getting together to describe a picture with just 100 words, not 101...not 99 - 100 hits the mark.

Enough idle chatter? Well if you say so...but I personally say I never can get enough...*smirks*

Let's say you're sitting across from the man you love—maybe sharing a pot of coffee and some homemade cookies…in your mind you could be naked on top of that table for him to witness and judge…*leans forward and peers into his eye…the doorway to the soul*…



I sit here completely exposed to you. I stripped off the window dressing down to my core and took the leap…making you aware of my true feelings. I asked for what I wanted, not caring how needy I appeared. I did it out of reverence for us, for our relationship, for our future together.

You listened to my babbling. You didn't laugh at me. You didn't jest with the desires I require fulfilled. You didn't mock my shameful pleading or deem me a lesser man for being emotionally honest. You cradled my heart. You protected my soul.

I love you.

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Need and honesty…trust and communication…tangled webs that can destroy lives…or if respected can bind two together forever…and that is where love is nurtured.

*grabs your hand and makes the leap giggling* now for the fun part—let's blog hop to the next yummy morsel awaiting our presence!

19 comments:

  1. I love it Havan. That is sweet!

    SLira

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  2. This is sooo sweet. I would love someone to get as "naked" as him for me...
    A woman can dream, right?
    Great post my yang <3

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  3. Sweet and touching! Excellent work!

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  4. Beautiful, touching...soulful. I loved it. To be so pure and honest...would be so hard for most of us:) xo

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  5. Wow, that was really good. I loved it!

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  6. Oh wow, how symbolic, he bared his soul and his body. What a cool take on this picture. Creative, touching and very moving. I loved it.

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  7. Oh wow! That was so heartfelt and beautiful. Love it!

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  8. Loved it Haven. Sweet and poignant

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  9. I really liked this. It felt like I was reading a love poem. :)

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  10. I agree with Sherri. Very romantic. I think I have competition for my title, The Queen of 'Awwww'". Good job.

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  11. Very loving. Very emotional and honest. Great post.

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  12. Lyrical and beautiful in the vulnerability and loving in the connection.

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