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Friday, March 30, 2012

Flash Friday Fiction #16


Happy Friday Everyone!!!

Are you ready for the flashing to begin????

So this Friday Flash Fiction is a number of talented authors getting together to describe a picture with just 100 words, not 101...not 99 - 100 hits the mark.

Enough idle chatter? Well if you say so...but I personally say I never can get enough...*smirks*

Ever want something or someone so bad that you don't think of what that might actually detail? Well Drake did…and I stress the 'did' part… 


Drake couldn't believe that he finally got Jez's attention. He was gonna slam her ass so good that she wouldn't remember any other guy ever. She'll come running to him and begging him for it.

He yanked her hair with one hand while lifting her little school-girl skirt with the other. She moaned and he tugged harder.

"Oh yeah baby, you'll feel this—"

He did a double take of her ass. What the fuck? He looked closer…and counted ten…maybe twenty guys' names tattooed across her cheeks…and three girls'.

Well fuck! So much for making her forget all the others.

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Well…let's look at the bright side...at least she isn't rating them also—yeah, I'm gonna get a lightning bolt in my assets for going there *heads desk giggling*…oh-kay…*grabs your hand and makes the leap giggling* now for the fun part—let's blog hop to the next yummy morsel awaiting our presence!

20 comments:

  1. I have to say this one made me laugh out loud. Never would have thought about the tats. Excellent job.

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  2. She tattoo'd names to her ass? OMG *dies* that poor dude.. LOL

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  3. Sounds like a challenge to me! Very funny and a wonderful Flash!

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  4. Whoo Hoo! so much for the "one and only"...LOL nice FFF

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  5. You made me laugh out loud at this one. Great FFF! :)

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  6. Great twist to the story! Great job.

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  7. Great take, Havan! What a slut she is and how naive he is! lol

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  8. That girl knows what she likes! Sexy and funny post Haven!

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  9. I laughed so hard at this one. Great post.

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  10. Havan, you are a trip. Twenty names, is her ass that big or do those guys all have little - 'names'? This is a wickedly funny FFF and I couldn't help laughing. I wonder who's names are on the front??

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  11. Ha my yang, you always make me smile..Or laugh... This is a great post, so much like you...
    She's a slut, isn't she? But what good times she seemed to have in life! You go girl!!

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  12. oh that was awesome, great twist, so didn't see that coming!!

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  13. A been there tapped that canvas, so funny!

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  14. Wow, that was awesome. Loved you take

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  15. I think he should give it all he's got just because he wasn't the first to discover the land doesn't mean he won't be the one to conqure it!!
    Nice flash.

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  16. I love this. Sometimes the arrogance of men will get them only so far....but if he does it right, she won't remember the names that went before...

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  17. He might as well put on his clothes and head for the door. She is advertising her hit list. That’s not a good sign. Excellent post!

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