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Friday, April 6, 2012

Flash Friday Fiction #17


Happy Friday Everyone!!!

Are you ready for the flashing to begin????

So this Friday Flash Fiction is a number of talented authors getting together to describe a picture with just 100 words, not 101...not 99 - 100 hits the mark.

Enough idle chatter? Well if you say so...but I personally say I never can get enough...*smirks*





"I can't believe you're smoking inside. Didn't we agree no smoking in the new house?" Brian mumbled as he straightened the room…again.

Dyer smirked and inhaled.

"You're just sitting there staring at me. Not lifting a hand to help. You're just sitting and smoking, smoking and sitting."

Another drag was Dyer's loud reply.

"This is terrible! Everything's wrong."

Dyer stubbed out the cigarette and sat up, pulling Brian closer and lifting up his shirt to nuzzle his furred belly. He chuckled, "Calm down, baby. My mother'll take one look at you and know what I know…I married the perfect man."
 
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*grabs your hand and makes the leap giggling* now for the fun part—let's blog hop to the next yummy morsel awaiting our presence!




14 comments:

  1. Well, l think he'd be able to wrap anyone around his little finger! Great post.

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  2. I had to chuckle at this one and go - yep - got that tee-shirt!

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  3. Now the question is, what will Dyer unpack first? Being that close to Brian I think I have an idea. Very nice.

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  4. Sounds like something I would do. I love it.

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  5. Sounds like something I would do. I love this post! Very real.

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  6. Stressing over the first meeting, been there done that. :) oh, the mother in law....

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  7. Love it! But still, darling- no smoking in the house!

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  8. ah, that is so sweet, I almost forgive him for not helping, not :)

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  9. Fabulous!!! I love this.
    Great FFF

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  10. Oh man, yes This was very good, with a smile at the end! I love it. Thanks for flashing me! And I love a "furred belly". It tickles.

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  11. "....his furred belly"? I really enjoyed this FFF, so playful, loving and the horrible nesting urge we get when we know we are going to meet the in-laws. Typical in any relationship. Loved it:) xo

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  12. Ah the pre-jitters before meeting the in-laws. Everyone had to suffer through it at some point in time. I enjoyed your flash very much. Very realistic.

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