Friday, February 3, 2012

Flash Friday Fiction #14

Happy Friday Everyone!!!

Are you ready for the flashing to begin????

So this Friday Flash Fiction is a number of talented authors getting together to describe a picture with just 100 words, not 101...not 99 - 100 hits the mark.

Enough idle chatter? Well if you say so...but I personally say I never can get enough...*smirks*

"Come on, let's do it again." My heartbeat was still fast and erratic, the air flowing in and out of my lungs rapidly.

"Oh come on…again?"

I smiled down at my lover. "I promise, one last time then we can nap. We can curl up in each other's arms and snooze for as long as your heart desires. And when we wake up…"

He laughed at me, "Oh I know what we'll do when we wake up! Okay, one more time…let's get the leaves back in a pile, this time I'll make the loudest crunch when I land in them!"


*grabs your hand and makes the leap giggling* now for the fun part—let's blog hop to the next yummy morsel awaiting our presence!


  1. *grins* That was hilarious Havan! You so had me going and then out with the little kid fun. Very good! Love the twist.

  2. That one was so fun. I could see them jumping into a leaf pile. It left me with a fun image. Great post!

  3. So cute! I love the playful spirit!

  4. Oh hilarious!! Takes me back to my childhood. Love it

  5. Very cute. I used to love rolling in the leaves. In our current house there aren't enough trees to drop leaves.

  6. So cute and funny Havan. A nice twist

  7. I just love it!! I really thought it will end in a naughty way.. Very funny though!!!
    great post my yang <3

  8. LOL! He’s a big kid. It reminds me of the times when I used to run through people’s piles of leaves during fall. So much fun!

  9. Good job, Havan! I enjoyed the flash. You hint at the naughty and turn it nice with innocent fun. Everyone needs to take time out and be like that sometimes. Flash me again anytime.

  10. Who doesn't love a romp in the leaves! loved it

  11. LOL Amazing. It reminded me of two little kids playing. I love when I see couples acting like Big kids. The promise of the "after the nap" was hot too.

    Nice FFF